hi! i just want you to know i really like the writing piece you've reblogged a few times- it flows super nicely when reading it (which is maybe a weird thing to say bc its also choppy since i jumped back and forth with the number footnotes but whatever i still think its simple to read through while conveying a lot of different things). anyway def keep up the writing, you're producing some good work!
– Anonymous
hey, thanks! i don’t think that’s a weird thing to say at all lol, and is kind of what i was going for! it was really fun to write (and came quicker than a lot of other things i’ve written), so it’s not shocking to me that it seemed to flow yet also seemed a lil choppy! i wanted it to make sense and be shocking but not entirely unexpected (ie, the haggard goodbye/trying to almost prove his spontaneity by buying the skippy/his breaking from habit and obsession/etc), so i’m glad you saw that!!!
thanks again! :D
